Presentation review and improvements

 Main takeaway: The idea and planning are strong, but the presentation needs to show more and explain the story more clearly.

What to improve:

  • Clarify the story: is the video about one night or a relationship?
  • Play the song and show more clips, images and examples of the visual style.
  • Explain why you chose the moodboard images, and show where they came from.
  • Develop the artist’s character: what they wear, where they live and what visuals they use.
  • Add camera angles, movement, timing and editing style to the storyboard. Connect shots to the lyrics.
  • Show your own location photos and explain how their light and colours fit the video.
  • Show the props and where you’ll get them.
  • Leave the production plan on screen longer so people can read it.

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