Presentation review and improvements
Main takeaway: The idea and planning are strong, but the presentation needs to show more and explain the story more clearly. What to improve: Clarify the story: is the video about one night or a relationship? Play the song and show more clips, images and examples of the visual style. Explain why you chose the moodboard images, and show where they came from. Develop the artist’s character: what they wear, where they live and what visuals they use. Add camera angles, movement, timing and editing style to the storyboard. Connect shots to the lyrics. Show your own location photos and explain how their light and colours fit the video. Show the props and where you’ll get them. Leave the production plan on screen longer so people can read it.